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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 20:33:24 GMT -5
kk fine by me
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 20:34:27 GMT -5
and you dont have to overdo the () because its mostly thrue your viewpoint.
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 21:12:17 GMT -5
all right. thoughts? -----------------------------------------------
Jorgen walked up to Roverston's door and knocked lightly. (). Jorgen walked in with Kyle and Haze, and shut the door behind them. "So, Roverston, I heard something was wrong. By the looks of, well, you, I'd guess there is. Last I checked, people's skin and hair doesn't just suddenly get darker for no reason." Jorgen said when he saw Roverston. "Any way we could help?" (). Jorgen watched as Haze jumped off his back and went over and began sniffing Roverston. "C'mon, Haze wants some time to get to know you, so why not tell us what you need, what's causing this transformation of sorts." (). "All right, we'll meet back here this evening. Hope to see you there too, Kyle. Come on Haze, we should go find Shock." _______________________________
Haze looked around the dark house excitedly. He could see how little furniture there was, and he noticed much of it was made of stone. So this is where the creepy guy lives! Creepy. Haze though as he looked at the guy for the first time. Haze jumped off Jorgen and padded over to the guy and began smelling him. He even smells like a cave! When Jorgen called for them to leave, Haze turned and quickly flew up onto Jorgen's back, almost whacking Kyle with his tail. "Oops! Sorry!" Haze called back. _________________________________
Shockstorm could tell that Darkender had fallen in with him and he continued to fly towards the spot where the tree fell. He looked down into the woods and spotted Az, but he had seen them too, and took off to try and get away. "Well if he's running," Shockstorm called out loud, "then either something is wrong or he's playing with us! I, for one, highly doubt the latter!" Shockstorm put on a burst of speed and caught up with Az. "You didn't really think you could outrun me, did you Az?" Shock roared over to him, "Now are you going to tell us whats wrong or will Darkender and I have to ground you first!" (). "Well then ground you it is." Shock said before he folded his wings out in front of him, just like when he rides lightning, and dove while spinning right into Az, knocking them both to the ground. "Now," Shockstorm said as he got up next to Azronicle, "will you just tell us what's going on?" (). "Oh, well then I guess I'll see you then." Shock said as he took to the air to leave. "See you later, Darkender, Az." When Shockstorm got back he found out that Jorgen had a very similar talk with Az's human Roverston, the shadow-guy. Well I guess we're all meeting at shadow-guy's house this evening.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 21:16:19 GMT -5
absoulutely amazing a damn good templete XD
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 21:17:30 GMT -5
now since it seems none of the parts are narated from nights characters let me fill it in and we place it
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 21:17:52 GMT -5
XD Thanks! I kinda went into my fanfic writing mode for most of it, especially the Shock section ;D
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 21:19:08 GMT -5
Yeah, my OCs didn't really pay attention to his.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 21:58:14 GMT -5
Jorgen walked up to Roverston's door and knocked lightly. "Come in obviously it looks to be of no use to try and chase you away. Jorgen walked in with Kyle and Haze, and shut the door behind them. "So, Roverston, I heard something was wrong. By the looks of, well, you, I'd guess there is. Last I checked, people's skin and hair doesn't just suddenly get darker for no reason." Jorgen said when he saw Roverston. "Any way we could help?" "Honestly I would say leave me alone but that isnt going to help isnt it?" from the silence it looked like he was about to get angry but he only sighed. Jorgen watched as Haze jumped off his back and went over and began sniffing Roverston. "C'mon, Haze wants some time to get to know you, so why not tell us what you need, what's causing this transformation of sorts." "Ok I guess ill have to submit or ill never hear the end of this. Well when my dragon gets here I guess I should go back to where it all started breakneck caverns there has to be something anything there that tells me whats wrong". "All right, we'll meet back here this evening. Hope to see you there too, Kyle. Come on Haze, we should go find Shock." _______________________________
Haze looked around the dark house excitedly. He could see how little furniture there was, and he noticed much of it was made of stone. So this is where the creepy guy lives! Creepy. Haze though as he looked at the guy for the first time. Haze jumped off Jorgen and padded over to the guy and began smelling him. He even smells like a cave! When Jorgen called for them to leave, Haze turned and quickly flew up onto Jorgen's back, almost whacking Kyle with his tail. "Oops! Sorry!" Haze called back. _________________________________
Shockstorm could tell that Darkender had fallen in with him and he continued to fly towards the spot where the tree fell. He looked down into the woods and spotted Az, but he had seen them too, and took off to try and get away. "Well if he's running," Shockstorm called out loud, "then either something is wrong or he's playing with us! I, for one, highly doubt the latter!" Shockstorm put on a burst of speed and caught up with Az. "You didn't really think you could outrun me, did you Az?" Shock roared over to him, "Now are you going to tell us whats wrong or will Darkender and I have to ground you first!" "GET OFF OF ME YOU OVERGROWN EEL!!!" He then proceeded to soot his grapnel spines missing terribly in his rage filled state. "Well then ground you it is." Shock said before he folded his wings out in front of him, just like when he rides lightning, and dove while spinning right into Az, knocking them both to the ground. "Now," Shockstorm said as he got up next to Azronicle, "will you just tell us what's going on?" "Well since it seems I don't have any choice at all i guess ill just spit it out. Im worried about my human since it seems he is changing somehow I can't figure out how at all, first he became alergic to the sun i mean what in thors name can make someone alergic to the sun the his skin now looks like mine minus the scales now the hair is the same and all I want is for him to just be happy but obviously these recent developments are making him a trainwreck!" he screeched in annoyance every word sounding more and more distraught. he got up to stretch but his muscles where not recovered from the shock as soon as he stretched his left grapple spike shot into a tree with a flicker of pain "GODS!!! did you really have to shock the hel out of me to get the hel away and let me calm down ill meet you at my riders house". "Oh, well then I guess I'll see you then." Shock said as he took to the air to leave. "See you later, Darkender, Az." When Shockstorm got back he found out that Jorgen had a very similar talk with Az's human Roverston, the shadow-guy. Well I guess we're all meeting at shadow-guy's house this evening.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 21:58:54 GMT -5
Penny for a Shockstorms thoughts
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 22:15:37 GMT -5
huh now im dubbed the shadow guy funny hehe.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 22:41:48 GMT -5
i think our end result turned out fantastic
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 23:13:54 GMT -5
OK shock i neeed you to do just a small little tidbit before i take the reighns i need you to do the part where Haze meets up whith Az and make sure they are alone for this meeting. (btw make sure to have plenty of () for the interaction between Haze and him theres going to be some major things implemented there but i cant c how top start that meeting since im clueless on haze and you prolly know my character better then i yours but after this i will write the scenes till they are leaving)
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 23:52:04 GMT -5
Yeah, my OCs didn't really pay attention to his. Well why pay atention to anyone else but the insanely weird dragon species and the creepy alergic to the sun and skin changing guy in a house of stone furniture crafted better then any human
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Post by killjoy on Mar 9, 2013 12:42:23 GMT -5
After having met Haze I went into his home to find Rovertson and was greeted by the whole gang. His rider greeted him with a nod. () said Shockstorm. The meeting with Haze had successfully calmed my nerves to the point of himself not feeling the need to be hostile.
I listened as the group talked about how to convince Hiccups father, I thought good luck with that. Jorgen said to Rovertson () "But there's noway he will agree he hates weakening the village, and I most definitely think losing all of us and our dragons leaves us more vulnerable" Said Rovertson. I just rolled my eyes at this knowing full well Stoic was about to walk in, anybody could smell that man from a mile away. The door opened with a slam against the wall. "Whats this talk about weakening the village i demand an answer anything to do with the village deals with me."
All the dragons cringed at the booming voice of Stoic the Vast, he could clear a room of all dragons in a split second. A deathly silence filled the room as stoic standed there wondering what the hell was going on. Rovertson was the first to recover, "Umm Stoic we need permission to find out whats happening to me, frankly to tell you the truth im worried and so are everybody else. I think that if we head to the cave where all this started we might find some answers. can we go."
Silence permeated the building as the Vast man decided my riders fate. I growled at his feet to try and make him understand no matter what he says ill kidnap my rider if I have to in order to help him.
"Ok but whatever you do don't get yourselves killed please we've had enough grief around here without you guys jumping into trouble"
Shockstorm said ()
Ok lets get packed we are heading out.
Haze excitedly said ()
Jorgen Said ()
Kyle said ()
Rovertson mumbled under his breath "Can my life be simple for once im tired of this." I thought you and me both.
Fill in them blanks and repost the results night and shock
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Post by night fury100 on Mar 9, 2013 13:16:06 GMT -5
After having met Haze I went into his home to find Rovertson and was greeted by the whole gang. His rider greeted him with a nod. () said Shockstorm. The meeting with Haze had successfully calmed my nerves to the point of himself not feeling the need to be hostile.
I listened as the group talked about how to convince Hiccups father, I thought good luck with that. Jorgen said to Rovertson () "But there's noway he will agree he hates weakening the village, and I most definitely think losing all of us and our dragons leaves us more vulnerable" Said Rovertson. I just rolled my eyes at this knowing full well Stoic was about to walk in, anybody could smell that man from a mile away. The door opened with a slam against the wall. "Whats this talk about weakening the village i demand an answer anything to do with the village deals with me."
All the dragons cringed at the booming voice of Stoic the Vast, he could clear a room of all dragons in a split second. A deathly silence filled the room as stoic standed there wondering what the hell was going on. Rovertson was the first to recover, "Umm Stoic we need permission to find out whats happening to me, frankly to tell you the truth im worried and so are everybody else. I think that if we head to the cave where all this started we might find some answers. can we go."
Silence permeated the building as the Vast man decided my riders fate. I growled at his feet to try and make him understand no matter what he says ill kidnap my rider if I have to in order to help him.
"Ok but whatever you do don't get yourselves killed please we've had enough grief around here without you guys jumping into trouble"
Shockstorm said ()
Ok lets get packed we are heading out.
Haze excitedly said ()
Jorgen Said ()
Kyle said "OK but I need to leave Rouge with someone because she's not well"
Rovertson mumbled under his breath "Can my life be simple for once im tired of this." I thought you and me both.
OK I think I have done this right
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