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Post by night fury100 on Mar 8, 2013 19:42:34 GMT -5
Kyle was just giving Stormfly a quick check to see how see was like he does with most dragons on Berk because it was his job he was the dragon doctor and he loved his job. "all done Stormfly your completely find" Kyle said to Stormfly whilst patting her on the back before packing his stuff up and heading to Hiccup's house to check on toothless he was about to knock on the door when he sore Jorgen heading to Rovertson's house and dissuaded to follow to see what he was up to
Earlyer that day Kyle told Darkender to have the to do what ever so he dissuaded to fly around the island a couple of times he was thinking about finding a mate (as in a female dragon) he did have one serjestan but he wasn't shore how to tell her, a minet later her heard Shockstorm say that something thing was wrong with a dragon called Azronicle who he didn't know much about, and he asked if Darkender wanted to come and his reply was a quick nod
OK how's that
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 19:48:13 GMT -5
I liked it, just a few spelling errors, but nothing spell check can't fix
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Post by night fury100 on Mar 8, 2013 19:48:57 GMT -5
Hopefully
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 19:50:16 GMT -5
great now that im back get the spelling done then lob it right on in
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Post by night fury100 on Mar 8, 2013 19:53:20 GMT -5
That's the best I can get it with the spell check
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 19:53:22 GMT -5
ok i got a major problem thats in my mind how are we going to have a chapter where all of our oces are talking at ounce and still get all the members to type it out any sugestions.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 19:55:58 GMT -5
because i have the idea of one of the mebers types out the scene and every place someones oc that isnt theres talks they put () and have them fill in what their oc would normaly say
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Post by night fury100 on Mar 8, 2013 19:58:04 GMT -5
Ok
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 19:59:05 GMT -5
that sound good for you shock and the first scene i want you to do then me then night ok
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 19:59:40 GMT -5
you first because the next scene wiill be relatively easy ounce i tell you what will happen ok
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 20:18:47 GMT -5
All right.
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 20:24:04 GMT -5
ok heres the gist of it both rider and dragon are thouroughly annoyed so keep that in mind when typing this and Az is not going to want to talk right away so he will run away from you two for a bit the rider is a lil more coperative but still completely annoyed. make them at the end come to an agreement and have the two groups meet at Rovertson house and talk out a plan to go to the cave where they met and make them get aproval from stoic -----Scene end ok for this chapter ill make a change you can make my characters talk as you think they would since im certain youll get it right but you need to ask night if hes ok whith his characters being narated by you ok
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Post by night fury100 on Mar 8, 2013 20:26:45 GMT -5
Its OK by me
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Post by killjoy on Mar 8, 2013 20:29:29 GMT -5
did you get the general idea btw make them mention something about rovertsons hair getting darker now along with his skin
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Post by Shockstorm on Mar 8, 2013 20:33:05 GMT -5
I'll probably still just do the () thing . Between my three OCs I can't think through any more OC personalities
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