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Post by warisin on Mar 30, 2011 19:36:38 GMT -5
I've come up with one good one so far, but frankly, no way Dreamworks will use it for a few reasons that are pretty obvious. Here goes nothing: Fast forward ten years. Hiccup and Astrid are married, and they have children. Hiccup has been unintentionally neglecting Toothless, who is beginning to feel alone in the world. One day, Toothless finds another female Nightfury, and they fall in love. Fast forward a few years. Toothless has kids too now, and he has completely drifted apart from Hiccup. One day, Berk is attacked by <insert enemy> and Hiccup, whilst valiantally defending his family, is about to be killed. Toothless jumps in the way and is fatally wounded. Cue sad tragic scene. But Toothless' girl does some wired Nightfury magic and transfers her life to Toothless, ending her life in the process. Cue real sad tragic scene. Hiccup makes up with Toothless, and the movie ends with a view of Hiccup's kids playing with Toothless' kids. Camera pans up to the nightsky, where we see a faint Nightfury fly across the full moon and stars.  . |
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 19:39:21 GMT -5
Hahaha funny. I doubt dreamworks would use that. It could be a good story plot if only you think of it longer.
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Post by warisin on Mar 30, 2011 19:51:19 GMT -5
Perhaps I could make it into its own stand alone novel. *Begins writing notes down*.
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 19:52:52 GMT -5
You can actually lol. I would like to read it!
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Post by warisin on Mar 30, 2011 20:00:53 GMT -5
You can actually lol. I would like to read it! Fan #1, woo! Anyway, any other ideas? |
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 20:03:04 GMT -5
Not right now, just by reading the 'sequel' preview you posted it made my imagination move a bit more. But I can't seem to get any ideas into my head.
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 20:25:45 GMT -5
Ok I got one that adds to what you already put.
Toothless feels lonely and he wants to be more with Hiccup. Hiccup gets annoyed because Toothless doesn't let him be with Astrid therefore he says mean things to Toothless, hurting his feelings. Toothless feels depressed and he leaves to live alone in the forest. He somehow takes the fake tail fin and the saddle off and leaves them somewhere where Hiccup would see them. Hiccup then regrets what he did and feels a bit depressed himself.
Ok so that's all I got for now. Hope it helps!
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Post by warisin on Mar 30, 2011 20:31:05 GMT -5
It's a good start. We should totally make this a collaborative project. Anyone can post and add their ideas and once a week or so I'll post what we have so far on a giant post. Get the word out!
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 20:32:56 GMT -5
I'll try to get more ideas.
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 20:53:56 GMT -5
A few years after Toothless is gone, Hiccup goes to the forest just for a walk. He gets to the spot where he first found Toothless (not the cove), he sees a dragon and as he gets closer, he realizes that it's a small night fury, about the size of a horse, stuck underneath a tree. He lifts the tree and helps it get out. The night fury looks at Hiccup curiously and as if saying "thank you." Then it disappears behind some bushes (Or something.). Hiccup watches as the dragon leaves then slowly turns around with a sad, depressing look on his face, thinking how much he missed Toothless. He almost felt like crying as he continued to walk. Hidden somewhere on the opposite direction Hiccup is facing, Toothless saw that Hiccup had helped one of his children. He watches him also with a sad look on his face, before returning to his family.
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Post by warisin on Mar 30, 2011 20:58:52 GMT -5
That's really good, I could totally picture that. Then later that night Toothless stumbles upon the enemy that attacks as I described before (another Viking clan?) and overheard their battleplans.
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 30, 2011 21:00:53 GMT -5
Yeah, if you would want to, or maybe a few days later no? In those days Toothless can think about what he saw. But if you want it to happen on that night then go ahead.
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Post by warisin on Mar 31, 2011 14:07:17 GMT -5
Actually, it night be better to hold it off a while.
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Post by toothless11 on Mar 31, 2011 14:08:58 GMT -5
Ok then, I'll try to think more ideas.
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Post by warisin on Mar 31, 2011 14:15:58 GMT -5
We need a subplot too. So far, plot wise, we have the Toothless-Hiccup relationship and the enemy Vikings. We need something else! Perhaps one of Toothless' kids and Hiccup's sons meet and become best friends just like Hiccup and Toothless did long ago. And during the attack they fight off the enemy Vikings but safe wounded and Hiccup and Toothless need to team up to save them? And then we can cut out my old ending, making the plot suitable for the whole family.
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